Thursday, September 30, 2010

#14

Generally speaking, I do not believe public schools should teach students ethics and personal values. Every person is a unique human being with different views and beliefs, making values personal. School should be a safe, positive, and accepting environment where students can develop into "good citizens" just by being present. For example, I have learned from school to be a respectful and responsible young lady, even though it was never put into lesson plans, or actually taught by teachers.
Personally, I don't think science classes should teach students about evolution just because there are many students, such as myself, who believe in creation, or disagree with the idea altogether. I agree that it isn't fair to teach about any religion or religious values in public school, and therefore I do not think it is fair to teach a controversial theory.

#15

Blog #15 - Discuss the three reasons Sante gives for a breakdown of secrecy (Soviet Union/KGB, internet, “confessional culture”/media). Do you agree, for example, that the Internet is a “nemesis” to secrecy? Defend your answer. 

#13

Reserved!

#12 El Flamenco Rosa

Self Check:
1. I believe that I did answer the promt. My essay was about Price's use of language and how it indicated her views of American culture.

2. I feel that my thesis is pretty straight forward and obvious. I think it is strong, and I am content with it.

3. My essay is focused on a central theme, and I do believe that my paragraphs build on top of each other.

4. In my essay, I did cover 1-2 things fully; but I admit that in the end I did throw in other things that I thought I should cover. Oops!

5. I do not believe that I vaguely explained my analysis. I included several quotes and textual details to support my ideas.

Reflection:
1. What went well? I finished my essay! :) Also, I was able to provide and support several different quotes from the prompt.

2. While writing, I felt exremely rushed, so I don't think I did as well as I could have. I didn't feel like I could afford the time to annotate so much, and I started writing my essay right away.

3. If I had more time to write the essay, I would annotate more, and organize the essay better. I would probably remove some of the half-baked sentences that I used for the sake of covering more ideas.

4. Well, I didn't really plan the organization of my essay. I had certain ideas with supportive details, and I ran with them to make paragraphs. I made changes to the ones that I thought were unnecessary.

5. While writitng and trying to suppport my ideas, I think I fully realized Price's views on American culture, and how money truly affects it.

6. For the next timed write, I need to organize my essay better!

#11

Reserved!

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

#9 Tuesdays With Morrie

May I please have my own Morrie!?

This book is definitely one of my top favorites. It's funny, but insightful, sad, but heartwarming. Out of all the wisdom that Morrie passed on to Albom, Morrie saying " once you learn how to die, you learn how to live" stuck with me the most. It made me realize that I, and a lot of other people for that matter, take life for granted. We always think there is going to be another day, when in reality, we can't be so sure of that. Once Morrie was diagnosed with ALS, he had an estimate on when he was going to pass away. However, most of us don't get a heads up when our time is coming. It just happens. This quote reminded me to focus on the big picture, to not get caught up with school, work, or the rest of the things that will not satisfy me for the rest of my life.

Thank you, Morrie :)